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Forsaken Love

A dormant volcano, it appears to sleep, Stirring within, waiting to be freed. It burns with such fire, so fierce & so deep, Abundantly flowing, yet hopelessly seeps. A love so intense, it's yet to be seen, Her passion's explosive, overwhelmingly keen. It runs through her veins, slowly going to waste, Disappointment and heartache was all that she faced. Buried so deep, a long lost treasure, Hidden beneath her, this forsaken pleasure. A love so suppressed, just seeking it's place, It patiently waits, to erupt in all it's grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 6:31:00 AM
Not quite a sonnet. The turn between second and third stanza is almost non existent and there is no closing couplet. Good poem in it's own right though.
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:53:00 AM
A nice sonnet. Well penned every line. Enjoyed............//hugs
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