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Formations (Haiku)

storm clouds form as rams roam across the sullen skies to reach darkened plains

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Date: 1/31/2010 7:54:00 AM

Interesting perspective captured in these three lines. Nice use of alliteration. Enjoyed the view. Keep on writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 10/20/2009 1:37:00 AM

Exceptional Haiku, dear Adell. Love, Lainie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/28/2009 3:46:00 PM

God's love and blessings to you also Adell! You will be back on your feet soon. Get your rest and do your therapy with limited ROM until you feel better. Prayers are being rendered for you. God bless always! Joseph

Date: 3/17/2009 6:05:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this concise poem. The title is fitting. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/3/2009 11:17:00 AM

Very nice imagery in this piece..love the first line..nice picture painted.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/3/2009 7:46:00 AM

Marvelous imagery Adell! '...rams roam across sullen skies,' ...cool alliterations. Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2009 7:49:00 PM

Adelle, I like the images of the clouds shaped like rams seeking "darkened plains." Have you ever heard a song called "Ghost Riders in the Sky"? It's a cowboy song about a herd of horses soaring across a scarlet sky. You have painted beautiful images. And thanks for your comments on "Robbing the Dead." Wednesday I go to my father's house to make a list of what was taken for the police. The thought has been giving me nightmares. Best wishes, Carolyn

Derrick Burton

Date: 2/7/2009 8:23:00 AM

wow, that was beautiful poetry, love the title as well. enjoyed the title and have a pleasant day.

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/7/2009 6:45:00 AM

Love this imagery! Nicely done! Love, Shar

Karena Brown

Date: 2/6/2009 10:37:00 PM

nice imagery...keep doing what you're doing!! :-)