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Formations (Haiku)

storm clouds form as rams
roam across the sullen skies
to reach darkened plains

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  1. Date: 1/31/2010 7:54:00 AM
    Interesting perspective captured in these three lines. Nice use of alliteration. Enjoyed the view. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 1:37:00 AM
    Exceptional Haiku, dear Adell. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 3:46:00 PM
    God's love and blessings to you also Adell! You will be back on your feet soon. Get your rest and do your therapy with limited ROM until you feel better. Prayers are being rendered for you. God bless always! Joseph

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 6:05:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this concise poem. The title is fitting. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 11:17:00 AM
    Very nice imagery in this the first line..nice picture painted.

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 7:46:00 AM
    Marvelous imagery Adell! '...rams roam across sullen skies,' alliterations. Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/2/2009 7:49:00 PM
    Adelle, I like the images of the clouds shaped like rams seeking "darkened plains." Have you ever heard a song called "Ghost Riders in the Sky"? It's a cowboy song about a herd of horses soaring across a scarlet sky. You have painted beautiful images. And thanks for your comments on "Robbing the Dead." Wednesday I go to my father's house to make a list of what was taken for the police. The thought has been giving me nightmares. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/7/2009 8:23:00 AM
    wow, that was beautiful poetry, love the title as well. enjoyed the title and have a pleasant day.

  1. Date: 2/7/2009 6:45:00 AM
    Love this imagery! Nicely done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/6/2009 10:37:00 PM
    nice imagery...keep doing what you're doing!! :-)

  1. Date: 2/6/2009 5:39:00 PM
    I can see that herd of rams in those dark clouds. Nicely done.! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 2/6/2009 4:40:00 PM
    Hi Adell - how are you hon - I like this haiku - Very well done - God Bless, MJ