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Forgotten Springtime

forgotten springtime... a lone daffodil unfolds beneath the red oak ____________________________________________________________ For Charles Henderson's contest "Strict Haiku 2"

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Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/7/2011 4:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your superb imagery here. Regafrds, Déirdre

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/5/2011 7:36:00 AM

Hi Carrie. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2011 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in the "Strict Haiku 2" contest by Charles Henderson. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/4/2011 8:18:00 PM

Many congratulations for this beautiful Haiku and win.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/4/2011 8:07:00 PM

lovely imagery Carrie, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 5:40:00 PM

Congratulations, Carrie. It was lovely

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/4/2011 4:41:00 PM

Carrie, This is beautiful, lovely images of daffodils, snow and red oak - so much in such a short haiku - congratulations on your win:))))

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/4/2011 4:39:00 PM

Congrulations on this ninth place win in the contest of Charles, carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/4/2011 3:55:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Haiku contest with such lovely words so expressive ... enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2011 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2011 12:06:00 PM

oops, congrats! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2011 12:05:00 PM

oops, congrats! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2011 12:04:00 PM

great win and cingrats, carrie! :) nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/4/2011 10:26:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful job Carrie! Congratulations on a worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 1/4/2011 10:19:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku!Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/4/2011 8:40:00 AM

This is so beautiful. Congratulations, Carrie! Love, Carolyn

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 7:07:00 AM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations. This is a wonderful haiku.

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/4/2011 6:31:00 AM

I thought this cut stood out stronger than most in the contest. A very good haiku even with a season word. I appreciate you entering. Thank you. Charles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:06:00 PM

Love it, Carrie, and I hope Charles does too!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 10:13:00 PM

A "true" haiku painted with your delightful images, Carrie. Best wishes for success in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/1/2011 1:13:00 PM

how lyrical can this 'ku get, carrie... love the soft flow and the anticipation of spring's burst! best of winning luck in the contest! :) nette