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Forgotten Souls

Let a shallow hold fixate your mind. We found something quite precious this time. A darkness pitch black, yet bitter and sweet. You never know what creatures you'll meet. There's drunkards,lost pedestrians, anointed sufferers, people so dark. Find yourself searching inside your own heart. For something more precious, less dark and more kind. This is how humanity shall spend the rest of their lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 8:05:00 AM
A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:48:00 PM
TIFFANY, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:57:00 PM
TIFFANY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Tiffany Von Tungeln
Date: 3/22/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you!! :)
Date: 2/21/2015 1:48:00 AM
"Hey Tiffany.:-) Wonderful poem. True emotions written down in simple words. Great!. Malvika. :-) "
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Tiffany Von Tungeln
Date: 2/25/2015 8:41:00 PM
I appreciate it. Thank you!
Date: 2/19/2015 1:04:00 AM
Excellent pen Tiffany! Truly enjoyed your poetic piece forgotten souls, dear friend. A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely evening! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Tiffany Von Tungeln
Date: 2/19/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you!!

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