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Forgotten Love

Forgotten Love Have you ever felt so distant, like you're in a different place? Like there's nothing so persistent, as the time that it takes. To realize that very instant, of everything you waste. But you've already missed it, the feeling of her embrace. So as a single thought enters, and fills that blank space, you're mind tries to remember, what you're thoughts can't retrace. And tho you want to so bad, you can't bend time and space. So don't let it drive you mad, that you cant see her smiling face. And tho you can't quite place it, there's something you forgot. Like your mind won't erase it, so it's left there just to rot. And so you start to taste it and your stomach turns to knots. Her love she gave you wasted, so your heart completely stops. Now your body, you might as well place it, in a pine box. Because there's nothing worth what's wasted. Her love you have forgot.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/31/2016 7:22:00 AM
Welcome to PS ,Anthony Clifford. I love your first entry here..Well done..Charma.
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Date: 5/29/2016 12:17:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Anthony. :)
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:25:00 AM
Anthony, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/28/2016 2:00:00 AM
Anthony,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 5/27/2016 5:58:00 AM
Hi, Anthony, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 5/27/2016 5:57:00 AM
Anthony, Y (why) R (are) U (you) using the letter U so much on your first poem. It' takes from your read. If you (not U) properly use the correct word, your first post would be much more appealing. You should consider the change, especially if you are considering to Flourish among the community. ;) Linda
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Date: 5/27/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for the advise. I did as you suggested and I hope you take the time to re-read my poem "forgotten love" I fixed a few mistakes.

Book: Shattered Sighs