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For poetic expression contest sponsored by the Silent One

Dear eloquent weaver of woes and throes, When the last pewter petal of weary winter falls as piercing prose, placing star-kissed tulips between our poignant poems, rewritten with effervescent emotions, remember, not every periwinkle verse composed from pain is in need of comprehension, for your miraculous ink bleeds metaphors of burning angst, that flutters rainbow powdered dust upon buttercups and daisies in my poetic pen, bestowing assonant vowels whirling as fairies on your selfless fingertips, along fragrant flowers in a forgotten field of forever~ orchestrating electrifying rhapsodies, where nylon strings of broken silence thrum magnetic moments of soulmates. So, allow me to rephrase the sadness that became my whole sky, repaint graphite horizons, in silver selenite reveries~ unraveling light to rewrite our tale with crimson fire across cranberry cloud lines. Whilst, I question the angels of mellow mulberry twilight, what if love was a thornless rose, will I still splatter rushing reds of this helpless heart across redolent canvases? what if lilac lilies floating across lost lakes never forget to sprout sonnets of sunsets? will I see reflections of misery I’ve inflicted, through your eyes that gleam in hints of daunting dusks endlessly within ripples of memories, or would I be seeing vivid fantasies of you and I? What if demons that drive this vessel change their tune? will you still feel the vehemence of heat streaming through blue-black stars seeped in my bruised veins? If only the sun can rhyme with the moon, maybe, cosmos with calligraphic scriptures of us will always sparkle~ as scintillating sapphire gems adorned with amethyst trinkets, amidst the darkness that seems more promising, when all hope is abandoned, but faith lingers, unbound to whats left of our bittersweet reality, for my soul, still sings your seraphic song, and there’s no music nor melody without the magical symphony of your alluring name, because of all the lives we lived, this is my favorite remedy; glazed in tangerine temptations over iridescent tears. Yours, beloved inked stem for a thousand springs and more..

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Date: 4/18/2024 1:00:00 PM
Very beautiful, Ink, and I am imagining this as written to the true love of your life. I really enjoyed that perfect ending you attached to it as well! Way to do Forgotten Fields of Forever. Surprisingly I have no comments to get to today, so off I go to the gym!
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Date: 4/18/2024 10:05:00 AM
I saw some of my favourite words. I love Mulberry. You portray a mix of everything and it just sits on the throne. Love, hurts, pain, wants. They all walk in cues. "If only the sun can rhyme with the moon." Doesn't happen all the time but we know it's not impossible, so for everything, there's a chance. A chance to live, to love and cherish. "not every periwinkle verse composed from pain is in need of comprehension." Much truth to this. I'll say the ink is as malicious as it is miraculous.
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Date: 4/17/2024 2:03:00 AM
Simply beautiful with your usual flare of alliterations and metaphors.
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Date: 4/16/2024 9:36:00 PM
Amazing, so human, Ink. I truly loved it. <3
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Date: 4/16/2024 8:02:00 AM
Not many can match your poetic expressions, my friend. The contest prompt reverberates in emotive, heartfelt, feelings in splendid diction and metaphors, as always, Ink.---for your miraculous ink bleeds metaphors of burning angst, that flutters rainbow powdered dust upon buttercups and daisies in my poetic pen---what if love was a thornless rose, will I still splatter rushing reds of this helpless heart across redolent canvases?----WOW! A FAVE!!
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Date: 4/16/2024 6:43:00 AM
You have written a remarkable poem, dear Ink, on the life-changing impact of love and poetry. Through the use of vivid imagery and metaphor, your mastery of emotion creation allows you to explore the intricacies of suffering, love, and yearning. Your use of colorful imagery and poetic words, such as "eloquent weaver," "effervescent emotions," "rainbow powdered dust," and "seraphic song," brings a wonderful depth and beauty to your writing. The metaphors you use, such "burning angst," "nylon strings of broken silence," and "tangerine temptations over iridescent tears," add depth and passion to the poem.
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:48:00 AM
so much to love about this poem, dear Ink. Your signature imagery filled my heart and soul. The 'what ifs' gave me pause. These were some of my favorite lines: this is my favorite remedy; glazed in tangerine temptations over iridescent tears. A brilliant poem, masterfully constructed. Have great day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:07:00 AM
So nice … as always a good one . What can I say , it’s hard to stay inspired and there you are spilling words of brilliance
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:47:00 AM
Dear eloquent weaver of woes and throes, that opening….. placing star-kissed tulips between our poignant poems, ..look at u making elements flow… flutters rainbow powdered dust upon buttercups and daisies in my poetic pen, amazing.. What if demons that drive this vessel change their tune.. damn I love that line .. cosmos with calligraphic scriptures of us will always sparkle.. there’s no music nor melody without the magical symphony of your alluring name, the magic of ur ink is heavenly papi!!!
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