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Crimson rivers flow in baron lands, Whilst money grows in another's hands. Like scenes seen in a sepia age, Sandstorms rage; Rust, dust & beige. The air riddled with whistles, Not of joy, but of ballistic missiles. The decay of today fades, Lost among the decay of an age. Lands will be re-trodden, And these natives re-forgotten. Modern arms now litter the paths, Along with modern legs, lungs & hearts. Was this scene foreseen in the forefathers’ eyes? Because this scene has just seen four fathers die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM
Really tidy, great sentiment and punch!-line
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:09:00 AM
The last two lines amplify the entire poem magnificently ...
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:48:00 PM
Excellent. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ravi. Jovial.
Date: 2/16/2016 6:49:00 AM
Heart feel poem, Jovial. The imagery is deep. Linda
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. I was trying to harness a little descriptive writing.

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