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Forgotten

I still could breathe Quietly, just before the pain. Sharp. My body cries, And my body bleeds. But I feel free. So, I just accept That I am alone, Lonely, And forgotten at best.

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Kilalo Mwashighadi

Date: 2/22/2016 8:45:00 AM

Good piece! I see a great poet here.

Brian Davey

Date: 2/17/2016 2:53:00 AM

Sometimes you need to be alone with yourself to work out what needs to be dealt with but don't forget on the outside their is always someone there waiting for you to decide to open the door again. very good write my dear!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/31/2016 3:00:00 PM

I agree with Silent One, you are never truely alone, but the feeling leaves one lost for awhile. Thank you for sharing :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/31/2016 12:39:00 PM

it may be a phase why we, at times, self-haze which, really, leaves me amazed at how you turned this phrase with your passion's blaze....and with the strength of your pen, you do defend all who feel they can't win because the words you extend empowers strength from within to never travel that road again....very inspiring words that need to be heard Kaitlyn....;)