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Forgotten He was broken, friendless, abandoned, living day to day, skulking in the brush. To warm himself, he lay dead still in a patch of sunlight allowing a hollow warmth to sooth him. I spoke to him, called him old friend, brought him food. He came to know me, to trust my footfalls, to come and greet me and wait patiently for his dinner. I invited him to come home with me, coaxed, prodded, cajoled, to no avail. He would disappear at times for a day or two, then return, hungry and looking for a scratch behind the ears, a friendly voice, a moment of friendship. In the end the thought of the coming winter, and his age, led him to concede his time. He left, still somewhat broken, but no longer friendless, no longer alone. I think he succumbed to a broken heart from which he never fully recovered, from the loneliness, not of being alone, but of being forgotten. I think of my old friend each time I walk past the sheltering trees from which he would emerge at the sound of my voice and thank him for the friendship he extended to me. The trust of a friend for a friend. John G. Lawless 6/23/2014

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Date: 7/29/2014 4:51:00 PM
Well done my friend....no greater love than from a pet...congrats
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Date: 7/29/2014 4:23:00 PM
Ah it was a kitty, I was picturing a dog, but still it was a great image, how powerful a four legged friend can be, what a good man you are for caring. Wonderful poem and a wonderful win:)
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:14:00 PM
Such a sweet poem, dear John.. To befriend a forgotten kitty... Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:23:00 PM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:40:00 AM
Deep n thotful write John! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:54:00 PM
I love this write. Deep enough to draw sweet water from!!! Congrats on a great win!!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/28/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Robert for your kind words
Date: 7/28/2014 8:09:00 PM
you are welcome.... have a nice day
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:53:00 PM
Hello John, this was by far the deepest, on my winning list.. I love it Congratulations!!! Have fun enjoying the win. I'm grateful, everything went well when judging this contest. Take care, and enjoy my latest blog "Maybe I'm Invisible" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 7/28/2014 9:33:00 PM
PD, you must be wondering what the heck was he talking about. I was reading several poems and in succession and Mark Twains comment was in my head. The kitty did teach me some lessons.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/28/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time and having the patience to sponsor the contest. I think it was Mark Twain who said "I went away and when I returned I was amazed at how intelligent my father had become" (or something like that)

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