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I have not lost hope But my way Living too long in dreams Of yesterday Death has come to visit, many years ago Yet I still breathe The echoing pain Of your loss once more This hour, I beg you Take my hand, lead me away And let me lay beside you Beneath the earth, I will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/19/2010 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Reem. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:07:00 PM
The emotions comes through your words in a heartfelt way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/11/2009 10:47:00 AM
Nice lyric one Reem , why don't you write any more????
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Date: 10/27/2008 6:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem expressing the depth of agony and pain. Touches the heart. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem The Defaulter featured this week. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/2/2008 6:41:00 PM
This just takes one to such a sad place of lost love....wow...brings tears to the eyes. ....Good writing...Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2008 2:20:00 PM
Very good rhyme in this most beautiful poem - God Bless
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