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Forgiving You

My resentment is like a parasite.
It’s barbed wire hooks have burrowed deeply into my beating heart.Pulsating it’s poison
into my smile
It’s displeasure so nauseating I lay feverishly under my covers
I want to forgive you……….I want to take all of my bad memories, all of the horrible things
you say
Stuff them in a box, locked in chains
Toss it into the Atlantic and then walk away
My pride is like superglue on the soles of my shoes
Preventing me from getting unstuck
Like a fly caught in a web I fought my way out.
I will push the words from the deep recesses of my chest
Let them pour from my mouth like ancient water fountains in Athens
I Forgive you.In these three words I release the parasitic anger that has clouded my
beautiful soul
I will admit it............I've made mistakes myself.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2010 7:50:00 AM
    first of all Congrats for making ur success in ur first round. . this poem is really a remarkable one. I loved it and felt it from the depth of my heart

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Laura. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/21/2010 8:01:00 AM
    LAURA, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 10:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Laura. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 3:08:00 PM
    I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this afternoon Laura. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 12:21:00 PM
    Good emotion portrayed in this poem. I think alot of people can relate. Emotion well painted in your words, good work. Judy Riley