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Forgiveness

Freedom with compassion Faith begins to spread a fresh start for transgressions - Feelings of gratitude for reawakening- Favor for the dismal Forgiveness claims back trust Pleiades F - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Date Written: September 22, 2016

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:02:00 PM
A wonderful description of forgiveness, Laura! Forgiveness truly sets us free. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/27/2016 4:01:00 AM
- Laura, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 9:00:00 PM
Nicely done. Congrats!
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2016 4:43:00 PM
So true. Congrats on your placement, luloo.
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:29:00 PM
Wise words Laura... best of luck with this entry :)
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:09:00 PM
Very beautifully written pleiades poem, Laura Loo! Wonderful content, full of wisdom, good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:48:00 AM
Nicely penned...Good luck with the contest...
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Date: 9/23/2016 3:58:00 AM
Great one for the contest LuLoo I love this form so much:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2016 12:32:00 AM
This is so interesting... a friend of mine, Craig Tigerman told me he 'invented' this form of poetry but I had never seen it used before. I actually like this. Your lines flowed very smoothly... Thanks for sharing... Jenni
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