Forgiveness

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Illusions broken bringing untold pain to debt unremitting hate Move from the victim evil never merited love from reprisal Grant Grace joyously forgiveness not denial embracing it's peace. Forgiveness Senryu Contest Sposored By Laura Loo 08/19/2016

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your second placement Charlie. Wise words here! 7 ; )

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/22/2016 11:23:00 AM

Thank You Connie...

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 5:03:00 PM

Charlie, your poem is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2016 8:21:00 PM

Thank you Sandra...

James Inman

Date: 8/21/2016 12:49:00 PM

Good advice Charlie, a lovely write.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2016 1:38:00 PM

Thank you James...

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:47:00 AM

Charlie, "grant grace joyously" perfect line for this contest...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2016 1:38:00 PM

Thanks for everything Luloo...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/19/2016 10:44:00 PM

I really liked the flow of this poem! Great write!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/19/2016 11:26:00 PM

Thank you Arthur...