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Forgiveness

I believe again My heart mends so easily When you say sorry I try yet again To live the vows together That is who I am I forgive again Because I love you more than The hurt you cause me Written on 08/19/2016 Contest: Forgiveness by Laura Loo

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:19:00 AM

Excellent Sara...this is a first place win for me! 7 ; )

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/22/2016 2:16:00 AM

Strong love, hey. I like your message of forgiveness. Congratulations, Kai.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 4:52:00 PM

Sara, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra

James Inman

Date: 8/21/2016 12:24:00 PM

Forgiveness is wonderful but forgiving does not mean having to accept being continually used. To say your sorry is hollow without change.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:37:00 AM

Sara...my fave line is "Because I love you more than the hurt you cause me"...beautiful dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of myc contest :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2016 6:47:00 PM

very nice. I like someone telling a personal story through this challenge

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 12:41:00 PM

Lovely entry Sara, bet wishes in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2016 8:37:00 AM

- A lovely and sweet forgiveness poem, Sara - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)