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I’ve burned the bridges surrounding me, Given harsh lashings tongue to the innocent, In the heat of angers emotional rush, ignored The pleas of the hungry, homeless and indigent, Yet mine own kindred, turn warmly at me and Forgive mine own short comings. I’ve lost my nerve in the heat of battle, Ran as if a coward, leaving others to know The sting of metals furious bite, then claimed As a survivor the ribbons of honor but still My brethren’s kindred, smile at me with pride. I’ve spoken blindly the words of ignorance, Bent and broken the laws of the righteous, And in Greed’s moments of silence asked For poundage’s tokens of wealth in turn. Yet a power on high still loves me, I have lost my faiths devotion, spoken Names in vain, oh but the light of glory Still shines around me, why, I do not Know. Maybe it is the true meaning in one word, Forgiveness? I’m the higher specious of intelligence Known as humanity, yet I rape the very Environment for which gives me life itself, Strangling it to its inner most core, Then bleeding it dry at the end. I’ve harvested from the tree of mine own Humanity, enslaving in bondage's shackles Thy kindred judging them by race, creed And religion. For these reason alone, I do not deserve Forgiveness. Yet it was given, As turning the other cheek was expressed, In the good book, the bible of faith, love, And devotion. Maybe it is the true meaning in one word, Forgiveness? CONTEST FORGIVENESS 02-17-2015

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Date: 8/11/2015 11:43:00 PM
i believe forgiveness is powerful Cheryl, a lovely read P.D.
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:06:00 PM
There are themes therein that I've written about in the past and I'd say this one is your darkest one I've read from you thus far. And if you don't already know I'm mostly a dark poet and am not afraid to write about the most controversial subjects whatever they may be. Very powerful and indeed this is excellent work. Thanks for sharing Cheri.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:26:00 PM
This poem Cheri, speaks volumes about man and his weakness, pride, surfeit, everything deplorable about his nature...but delivers powerful take on the theme of Forgiveness...A 7. Good luck in the contest! Smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/18/2015 11:56:00 AM
A very powerful write, Cherl, good luck in the contest a winner and a 7. Blessings eve
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Date: 2/18/2015 2:59:00 AM
- A powerful poem Cherl !!! - deep and very well written - I wish you best of luck in the contest! - Hope your day will be great :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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