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Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 2/28/2015 1:18:00 AM

Congs, short and precise good theme, i loved reading it.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2015 12:43:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Patrick:-) Hugs Jan xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/22/2015 9:51:00 AM

A bit dark and foreboding for my taste in poetry... but still I find it forceful with content.... Myself: Forgiveness frees the spirit of hate and despair... a burden the soul needs to find peace within. ... Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 2/21/2015 10:27:00 PM

Patrick, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2015 8:53:00 PM

Patrick, Congratulations ... Linda

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/21/2015 2:29:00 PM

I used to think the same way, but maybe what makes them pathetic is not the forgiveness, it is them not leaving. Congrats.

Patrick Feeney
Date: 3/19/2015 7:16:00 PM

just to clarify the poem was actually about myself and my anger at me forgiving them :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 7:01:00 PM

This is deep and sad Patrick - good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Jan xx