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Forgiveness

If a married man or a woman committed adultery, In the eyes of many people they are absolutely guilty, Especially if both party did the same thing, They will condemned for their immoral doing. For secret affairs revealed everyday, Painful heart crying in deep misery, Asking questions why they did it anyway, And family will be broken and divided, really. We’re all human and nobody’s perfect in this big world, We committed mistakes and we try to control it, if we could, I know we are all aware of the decisions that we make in life, Adultery is a sin but, who are we not to forgive our husbands and wives? Just give them a chance to prove that they really changed, To ask forgiveness to their love ones and plan to begin, a new life for the sake of the people we cared for, To bring back the pieces of the sins they've done before. 7th Place Winner For Delilah Ventura's "Adultery, forgive or not to forgive" contest October 22, 2012

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Date: 11/8/2012 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest Maria. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 1:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Maria! Yours are words that make for reflection - when betrayal occurs the hurt tends to obscur all the good that went before. But if we see past the hurt, then many marriages can be salvaged. Well penned.
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Date: 11/7/2012 11:50:00 AM
Lovely to see your fine write in the winners circle. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2012 6:26:00 AM
a reflective,shining work of art, paz... congrats on your fine win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 11/7/2012 1:10:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win maria paz xx
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Date: 11/6/2012 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations....Seren
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:39:00 PM
Maria, congratulations in Delilah's " Adultery , forgive or not to forgive " contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read her winners. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"
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Date: 10/27/2012 4:46:00 AM
Wise thoughts and wise and lovely poem.
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Date: 10/26/2012 12:56:00 PM
There are hidden blessings and healings all wrapped up in the package of forgiveness, to not forgive would be missing out on the blessings. Thanks for posting Maria. Carl,
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:43:00 AM
I do agree with your wise thoughts, dear Maria...although adultery is really a very sad situation, altering anyway the priceless backbone of a true relationship. But living is so difficult...Thanks a lot for your congratulations! Best wishes to you too!:) Love, Hanitra
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:39:00 PM
Your kind and forgiving spirit shines thru in this poem, Maria...thank you for your inspiration today - Tim
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:07:00 PM
Oh yes Maria. Forgiveness is very important and you have spelled it out so nicely. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:07:00 PM
I think if the person has been a very good spouse and they have done this kind of thing, you should try to forgive them. But if it happens again, off with their heads. hahaha. Good one!
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:41:00 AM
You have a great poem here. Sometimes it is hard to forgive when they keep doing the same thing over and over again. We can forgive, but we never forget. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:54:00 AM
so true,one silly mistake sometimes brings down mountains but did we really love the person if we give up so easily,great write Maria
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:15:00 AM
Learning to forgive is one of the most important lessons to learn in life! It completes us! Hugs and much love, Jack
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Date: 10/21/2012 6:29:00 PM
Wow! This is so beautiful my dear friend, Mary! Yes, forgiveness is very important! I love your poem. This is a winner for me! Good luck always my dear! God bless you always! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/21/2012 9:12:00 PM
GOT A SOUP-MAIL FOR YOU MY FRIEND.
Date: 10/21/2012 6:22:00 PM
soup mail Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2012 1:31:00 PM
Winner for sure in the contest..Good luck..Enjoyed reading your views about this flaw in some men and women..Thanks so mucho for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2012 1:07:00 PM
Maria, thank you for the inspiring poem... forgiveness is very important... always..pd
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:30:00 AM
Lots of good advice, Maria. It is important to forgive - start with a blank page. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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