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To Cut the Corner of Your Coat

(Giving voice to those who suffered and believe in poetic justice)
Should I cut the corner of your coat? Too many times you tried to squeeze my throat; you got perverse pleasure to see my page blank, thought I have overdrawn the polyglot’s bank. I saw your glee, you thought I went to flee, you did not understand, my spirit was in command. Without ascendancy you appointed yourself as judge, still I chose not to bear a grudge. Like David, my sins are uncovered, like him I never devoured Nathan; he was not sent by Satan. He was sent by Him, against Whom all have sinned. Yet you aimed to shame and then denied, thought you caught me by surprise and caused my demise. You have conveniently overlooked my word, I have confessed and made my peace with the Lord. Who sent you? You are not a messenger of peace, Your truth doesn’t set free but spreads strife and disease. You are not a prophet; are you the false king’s puppet? I saw Fate throw the dice, so now you are uncovered before my eyes; but like David, I too will kill hatred with love, he was content to cut the corner of Saul’s robe. An eye for an eye? It won’t make me smile to see you die, I will not honor vengeful games with my name. Now, I release myself from all the hurt you’ve caused and claim God’s gift; He who knows me more than most, denies you satisfaction to silence my thoughts. I am forgiven. Through His grace I forgive you seventy times seven, on your downfall you won’t see me gloat; I refuse to even cut the corner of your coat. From: 1 Samuel 24; 2 Samuel 12:1-13 and Matthew 5: 21-22 Inspired by Olive Eloisa's Theme: Not for contest Poem of the Day - 04 January, 2016

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Date: 1/10/2016 8:03:00 PM
Kim, love this impressive potent write! #7 Glad you are back and all the best in 2016. You rocked this, congrats on it being featured. Hugs
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:50:00 PM
Hello Kim... you have certainly returned with a powerful verse Kim. No wonder you received a POTD. Just keep entertaining us with your great writing Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on POTD Kim:-) so glad to see this powerful write getting extra exposure:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2016 8:22:00 PM
Good for you, Kim. It seems you have cleared the air for the new year with your indomitable spirit. You have risen above those who seek to drag you down. So glad you took some time to reflect in the Lord. You have come back stronger. Congratulations on POTD. It is well deserved. hugs my friend.
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:31:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on poem of the day with this powerful write, and soar on your beautiful poetic wings ~
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
A thumping write, Kim and, from what you've told me, a double edged sword- works on many levels. Way to go, girl. Viv x
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Date: 1/5/2016 2:10:00 PM
well, a POTD to the max... a touch act to follow you, kim!.. huggs
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Date: 1/5/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Kim for stopping by to take a look...Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/5/2016 7:39:00 AM
So wonderfully done, Kim, and full of wisdom for sure. Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem of the Day! Hug, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:50:00 AM
Wonderfully done with fantastic results! Congratulations dearest Kim!
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:07:00 AM
Dearie Kim, I like this poem lots, I am sorry that it didn't fit in the number of lines so i think you didn't able to enter but if you did, surely this a tight contender.. =`) I'm glad to inspire such wonderful poem like yours,!! thanks much KIm!!! hugs and smiles kabayan!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:15:00 AM
Fantastic! A lovely read
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Date: 1/4/2016 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations..........A.M.
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD Kim...best wishes
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:17:00 PM
wow, why can't it be in the contest? It is so AWESOME, and gosh, I am seeing it is POTD. WAY TO GO. a BIG seven for this well crafted poetry!!
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:41:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD Kim! Power packed !
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Kim. I know this would see the light of day! :) Hugs
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:45:00 PM
No pun intended - you came back with a vengeance, a vengeance determined to lay knowledge, insight and wisdom on ignorant behavior and you packed a successful punch that went bam, bam, bam throughout and I just loved it! Why did you choose to label it free verse? Maybe you can teach my something I am ignorant of. I heard steady, beautiful rhyme flow. Way to go, Kim. Also, wishes for a blessed, healthy, joyous and prosperous New Year! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:39:00 PM
Excellent write, Kim! You speak your mind, firmly, and at the same time you show how love and forgiveness are the eventual dignified winners over hate, darkness and negativity. Lovely to have you back:) Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2016 12:41:00 PM
.....also...Congratulations on POTD!! Ride your chariot, lady!
Date: 1/4/2016 12:38:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D., KIM !!!!
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Date: 1/4/2016 8:44:00 AM
A very good example of overcoming evil with good:-}
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:32:00 AM
Dim-witted sure are some people who fail to understand the loving hearts, but in return, hurt those who love them the most... Well expressed thoughts, Kim.. Loved reading it
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:06:00 PM
powerful words you wrote....about the cut corner of the coat....I totally agree and I hope....that no one tries to cut my throat....because in the moment my opponent better hope I ain't on it to the point where I say dog gone it you really don't want it because that's 1 a.w., I would ensure they own it....lol....real talk though and I simply Love this kim....thanks for telling me about it but once I saw you on, I would probably see what you got anyway....;)
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:59:00 PM
Wow. When all is said and done, marvelously penned; immune from negativity and complacency, and the spirit of diplomacy lives on. thanks for visiting.
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Date: 1/3/2016 4:54:00 PM
Such powerful words Kim so good to see you come back with your fighting spirit so strong. I am delighted to see you back:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2016 5:24:00 PM
It is just wonderful to see your fighting spirit back Kim we have missed you and we mustn't let the bullies get us down:-) hugs Kan x
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