Forgiven

nailed by betrayal anger consumes darkened nights questioning my fate yet time cleanses wounds through enlightened reflections hurt is forgiven life begins anew as soul claims serenity... peace dwelling within Forgiveness Senryu Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo 8/21/2016

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/26/2016 10:14:00 AM

Liked the last senryu especially. The line "peace dwelling within" is excellent! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/23/2016 12:40:00 PM

'time cleanses wounds',very rightly said, Nette!Congratulations!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/23/2016 12:32:00 PM

Beautiful...Nette...Congrats on your superb win...

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/22/2016 4:26:00 PM

Beautiful poem my friend. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 AM

'Anger consuming darkened nights'. Brilliant. Congratulations. Kai

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:03:00 AM

Nette, your second stanza second line is beyond beautiful, and has the ability to transform. Congratulations on your well deserved first place! 7 ; )