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Below is the poem entitled Forgive which was written by poet ashek rahaman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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It was early dawn
The boy put the rug on the floor
He kneeled, prayed like he never did
The almighty's heart started to bleed
Even he couldn't do anything
He felt helpless
His child was suffering
He saw his angels fleeing
as his child kept kneeling
The almighty  could not turn the world upside down? 
Break every rules he made by his own
For one he could not make the others  change
The boy cried for mercy
 The almighty started to cry
He could not give the boy
His one true joy

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:01:00 PM
    even GOD(almighty ) is helpless now .so crazy this world now .it reveals symbolically something about this contemporary world .nice tribute to all common man in this world .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:04:00 PM
    a very heartfelt poem here..enjoyed reading Ashek!!!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:33:00 AM
    a very sad poem. The almighty can always make a way. Hugs, Catie :)

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    Date: 5/30/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    but how good/bad was the poem