Forgetmenot

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forget me not there must be a reason to hold on to a flower of such rare beauty

so i look at two sides from flower to words a coin spinning a mixed bag of feelings

i wrote it in unrhymed couplets meaning two sides to every tango

In sweet summer aroma these eyes burn hungry as feelings fall down from the branches baptised beautiful Forget not me in every waking dream memory crowning each and every smile come true precious Seduced where darkness held the eyes content blinded in love wings clipped fallen grace kneels As blue skies mirrored through eclipsed reflections when the wheel of our time stood still lost in a dark space past Cut from the light suffering dead of misfortune night whispering horrors soft velvet guinness chills crawl Through the heart coldly spineless creatures murmur warmly where the fire burns hiding in the ashes truth prevails Its here you touched me with deeply chains bound angel in wings so lost inside holding onto a distant dream beginning twilight hours There is no sun in the shadow of an enchantress queen sorceress of spells cast under to bring down love oathbreaker of destiny

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/26/2016 10:36:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2016 10:14:00 AM

So passionate Liam...some great lines especially "As blue skies mirrored through eclipsed reflections when the wheel of our time stood still lost in a dark space past" a perfect tango and a fave