Forgetful

Without paper and pen Thoughts through my head Like raindrops falling Never to be seen again Written 10/13/2015 Contest: 10 lines or less Sponsor: Rob Carmack

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Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 9:37:00 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:54:00 PM

hey, I see it has a win as well. Back here to say Congratulations.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/16/2015 8:04:00 PM

Well thank you very much for stopping by again. You made my day yesterday with the wonderful comment, coming from you that means a lot to me

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2015 4:13:00 PM

this is wonderful!!

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/15/2015 11:16:00 AM

The words are easy to relate to and the story is all too familiar. A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being a poet. Emile.

James Inman

Date: 10/15/2015 9:37:00 AM

Very Clever Greg.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/15/2015 2:10:00 AM

Congrats on superb win Greg with this wonderful write!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/14/2015 8:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this poem. I keep paper and pen handy at all times.

Mark Woods

Date: 10/14/2015 4:29:00 AM

I so relate to this, I need to have a pad in the car with me I think. Good luck in the contest

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/14/2015 8:01:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I have one in my car and it helps but can be a little dangerous at times