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Forged

From the tomb of the ancient bloom comes something stronger sharper out the ground rusted from womb thrust into a refiners fire the starter smoke bellows carrying impurities away iron puddles a purer bloom is wrought the flowering steel becomes a fillet shaped with the hammer the slag is naught into the fire again drawn out and tempered iron sharpens iron for the master's use an instrument forged in the fiery embers shining sharpened a sword has been cut loose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/7/2016 4:30:00 PM
John,, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:00:00 AM
John, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:59:00 PM
Very dramatic, John...And very original - I am rather impressed! :) john
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John Beam
Date: 2/14/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thank you John. I wanted to use bloomery, in the poem but then, this poem would have been longer than I wanted.

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