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Forewarning

It came in silence of the night And almost stilled my heart with fright. The voice was very low and clear Saying the name of my only son Telling me that his life was done. That night I slept no other wink. My mind was muddled, I could not think. I had seen my son that very day. He was happy and looking well. What that voice meant, I could not tell. I called my son when dawn appeared. I didn't tell him what I'd feared. "I called to say I love you Son". Those had not been useless tears I'd cried. Before another week, my son had died.

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Date: 12/27/2022 1:42:00 PM
Whoa Joyce... I don't know what the contest required but this twists the heart. Praying this was fiction. Take care dear Joyce :)
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Date: 10/6/2020 12:28:00 PM
boy, this made me shiver, my friend - such a heartbreaking but excellent write x
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Date: 10/5/2020 1:55:00 AM
A very touching poem to read. This is a poem that makes you want to embrace precious moments, it pleaded more time for the realization of acceptance. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/3/2020 3:09:00 AM
Joyce, a perfect poem opportunity for a devastating story. Deeply sorry for your loss, an unthinkable nightmare... Very succinctly written poem, that's a tough write.. Congratulations on its Number One Win.
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:02:00 PM
thank you for the win. He died so suddenly and so soon after I heard that warning.
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Date: 10/2/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. This was true story and he died just days after those eerie words in my dream.
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done, although it prompted background music of Vera Lynn singing, "We'll meet again, don't know where, don't know when ......" Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:34:00 AM
- A deeply moving story, Joyce :) - Congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:28:00 AM
How sad this happened to you, Joyce. I do believe we sometimes have foreshadowing events before a loved one dies. Remarkable story and superb writing. Congratulations on a first-place win. Best wishes, Carolyn
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