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Sitting on my front step, A black mental box awaits me. Chills run up and down my spine, Disturbing feelings whirls within. Ridiculous, it's simply a child's doll Passed down from a distant relative, Whom I've never seen. Taking it out of its coffin like box, I display it on my overstuffed chair. Its blue piercing eyes look much to real, As if it has a will of its own. With great fear, I put her back in its box, Tying it with my spindle twisted threads. Human hair intertwined with wool Creates stronger more durable yarn. This I know. Night after night the doll haunts me in my dreams- The infinite hour glass evokes my past self. The doll points to the hour glass and speaks, "Thy sands are running, thy doom is fixed." Afraid to the point of mental exhaustion, I bury the doll in the middle of the night. Deep down in the ground where her soul belongs. In the morning the doll sits full of dirt on my front step once again. A scream is heard. For Jeremy Martin's contest, "Objectify Me "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 12:21:00 AM
so did this one ever win?? I remember how much I loved this one. But i see no congrats!!
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Date: 2/22/2013 10:25:00 PM
Certainly imaginative. Interesting twist on the uses or personality of the items mentioned.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/23/2013 12:48:00 PM
I had to dig down deep for this one. An unusual write for me. Much appreciated comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 2/19/2013 10:53:00 PM
wow, this is the best one I have seen entered in this contest, Connie. I took one look at the rules of this contest and screamed out like your doll here!! but you did not scare. You took the DARE and came up with something awesome!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/20/2013 6:54:00 AM
Lol, so did I. But I dug deep and gave it a try. Thanks for your wonderful comment. Could you read "Willow Trees and Peacocks" Poem? It's a Haiku. I don't know what I'm doing when penning one of these. Thanks. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 2/19/2013 6:30:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by ..this is scary! Light & Love Always
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/20/2013 6:55:00 AM
Love reading your poetry. Thanks for your comment. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
Date: 2/18/2013 10:03:00 PM
Oh it's for a contest.
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Date: 2/18/2013 5:50:00 AM
Great write...but now I'm scared! ;) Enjoyed reading this so much, Connie! Hope that "doll" behaves! ;)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/18/2013 6:56:00 AM
Thank your Eileen for your comment. After writing this I won't be able to look at another doll without thinking it might be possessed. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 2/17/2013 9:11:00 PM
This is a fearful write, one of great terror, a masterful write! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem! What an magnificent and amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/18/2013 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Russell for your wonderful comment. This scared me after writing it. I'll never look at another doll without thinking it might be possessed. Warm Smiles, Connie

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