Forever You My Love

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In your heart you know who you are

Many years have passed silver strands in the hair A promise within this coloured ark held me captive every dream has always ended with you Life put down snares to separate us love First it convicted me a criminal without evidence How the heart bled trying to defend itself against lies Unsure of the path when tears told a story Until my dying day you were my everything Every memory holds you like it was yesterday Never forgetting how the sun shone on the vision of an angel It framed you forever as my best friend Lost in a world possessed by lies The one and only whom gave me time A trigger I will never forget

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/9/2023 11:58:00 PM

Love this so well written romantic poem full of love, gratitude and sadness Liam. So well expressed. I love the line,’Every memory holds you like it was yesterday’ in particular. You are such a wonderful poet that can convey deep emotion so easily and you write with great intelligence too Liam. I hope you will post more again so we can enjoy your wonderful work. Thank you for sharing. Blessings and smiles to you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2023 2:59:00 PM

How loving,sweet and sincere this poem is.I can feel the fondness and gratitude one can have for another.This transmits a beautiful feeling. Lovely to read you again.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2023 1:12:00 PM

Smiling the pen was itching to speak, heartfelt beautiful comment bless you always with radiant colourful light always your friend Liam

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/24/2023 6:56:00 AM

Great poetry my friend. Your verses tell of a sad story. A fav for me. God bless.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2023 1:09:00 PM

Bless you Robert it touches my heart your beautiful comment may God grace you with beautiful light

Tom Woody

Date: 7/19/2023 2:07:00 PM

Exquisite Liam

Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2023 1:08:00 PM

You're welcome and I may eventually repost our collaboration together. It was sublime

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 7/23/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thank you so deeply Tom your comment heartfelt bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2023 12:27:00 PM

- Liam ... almost a year since you posted here on soup ... so wonderful to read your romantic and beautiful poem - Hope all is well with you and your loved ones :) - hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/26/2023 1:32:00 PM

All is well thank you dearest pal, spent a while in hospital with pneumonia and just over an operation, so I was keeping it low key, bless you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated I pray ?? all is good with you