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Forever With Love

Forever With Love (Devils Echo) Dreams I’d seen did come true-true-true Hugs and happy smile The place when I met you-you-you Making life worthwhile Now in the suns warm rays-rays-rays Beautiful to see There shall be happy days-days-days Meant for you and me With such a charming heart-heart-heart And true loving care Love shall always be part-part-part Forever to share Making all love fruit sweet-sweet-sweet From heaven above A daily pleasing treat-treat-treat Forever with love
Devils Echo. by John W Henson is done with the last three words of each 8 syllable line repeated to create the echo. These can be 1 or 2 syllable words, so long as the line is 8 syllables long. Each verse syllable count is.....8.5.8.5. Rhyming Sequence.......a.b.a.b. c.d.c.d ... etc.

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Date: 6/14/2013 1:28:00 PM
- True love! - Beautiful poem Erich! - Have a restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Erich Goller
Date: 6/14/2013 1:53:00 PM
thank you very much,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,Hugs!Erich

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