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Forever Wish Dished

Wish's Forever Dish Once a stars twinkled beckoning a wish Love desired was wished, when we met, it was dished We loved, as no other could ever imagine Two becoming one in every fashion Twilight found us in warm embrace Never more a star’s wish would we chase When our wished upon star lost its twilight hold and you in turn left from our earthy home a new star was birthed within the heavens winking I gaze on it still our love ever twinkling We melded, like shadows combined and interwoven, against all odds our unity never broken Hands firm, still, on the rails of endless time Soulmates forever starlit entwined © Debra Squyres

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/20/2015 12:15:00 AM
such a pretty one. I see it got a win down here. BIG congrats, Debra.
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:28:00 AM
Hi.
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:27:00 PM
The first stanza really brought me into your poem, and truly enjoyed it in full.
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:44:00 PM
Debra, your poem is so beautifully written and so full of true love, and thanks for visiting my poem oh the tears and for your thoughtful comment and yes Debra the words are true ~~
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:16:00 PM
You're living in the heaven's Debra. You walk above the ground. Your vision see's beyond today and show's you where you're bound. The soulful sense within your heart shines out for all to see. Every leaf's accounted for on your family tree. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 11:10:00 AM
"A new star was birthed within the heavens winking I gaze on it still our love ever twinkling" such a remarkable write!
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/22/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Nijeri Junjeri.

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