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Forever Sure

Forever more... is how I answered her She asked me how long I would love her for forever more no less no more I swore No high wall or strong door I'm sure and my word I gave she my love and my soul her slave Forever sure Written by my son 2012

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Jack Ellison

Date: 12/29/2012 6:29:00 AM

Your son is a very talented and creative poet my dear friend! Awesome! Best wishes for 2013!

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/29/2012 8:52:00 AM

Thank you, I agree, that is why I had to post it. He read the comments also and he thanks you and appreciates your comment and appreciation.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/29/2012 1:46:00 AM

Whoa! It is a beautiful poem! The idea of forever and nothing else - now that is an all encompassing love described. Well done for him!

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/29/2012 8:58:00 AM

On behalf of my son & myself we say thank you for your comment and we are so glad that the poem conveyed the feeling he was trying to express and that you were able to tap into it. Thank you JoanMarie & Gary.

Faleeha Hassan

Date: 12/28/2012 6:06:00 PM

It's a nice sentiment Written on the form of poetic images Thank you, dear and your son

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/29/2012 9:02:00 AM

Oh my dear friend, on behalf of my son & myself we thank you for your comment, well said. We are so glad that you got the sense of his poem. Thank you, JoanMarie & my son Gary.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 4:25:00 PM

thanks for sharing awesome poem xoxo pd

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/29/2012 9:07:00 AM

Your very welcome. We are both appreciative that you took the time to read and comment on it. Thank you JoanMarie and My Son.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2012 11:19:00 AM

A great talent for the future, very well written! Wishing you and your family a happy new year 2013! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/29/2012 9:13:00 AM

We thankyou...I think so too... JoanMarie and My Son