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Forever My Love

How long, you may ask Will I always be true? Forever my love Forever my love How long will I bask In the wonder of you? Forever my love Forever my love How long will I be In my own fantasy When your lips Are the joy of my day And why should I pout Or be ridden with doubt When I know That you love me today If the sea Is for sailing together And the sun Is a rose-colored hue Then the moonlight above Is a symbol of love When the stars Are a mariner's view How long is our sweet Undertaking Forever my love Forever my love How long is the love We are making Forever my love Forever my love How brief is the night When the evening is bright And the lovelight Is shining in you How long is the day When I miss you and say That the sky Has a purplish hue If our laugh, is a lock On forever And our joy Is a jubilant sight Then our heaven will be When you lie next to me In a dream of forever Goodnight. Written and submitted to the "Forever My Love Valentine" poetry contest Sponsored by BJ Legros Kelley On January 5, 2022

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Ann Peck

Date: 2/11/2022 8:03:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem - it could be a song. It's a real Valentine :)

Bryan Norton
Date: 2/11/2022 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Ann. Thanks for reading. Take care. Bryan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/10/2022 8:42:00 AM

I really love this beautiful poem filled with sentiments of love. You enfolded the loveliness of nature into a romantic rendezvous! Congratulations on your deserving first place win. Blessings xxoo

Bryan Norton
Date: 2/10/2022 3:44:00 PM

Thank you Connie. I appreciate your time to read and comment. Best wishes, Bryan.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 2/9/2022 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. This is a swert love poem. Well done

Bryan Norton
Date: 2/9/2022 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, it was very nice to get your comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2022 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations for your win with this excellent poem....i love your line, If our laugh is a lock on forever ... ! :)

Bryan Norton
Date: 2/9/2022 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Best wishes, Bryan

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/8/2022 10:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win Bryan, this is such a beautiful poem! Thank you for entering in the contest, your poem is a beautiful work of art and love! God bless you ~ <3 ~ B.J.

Bryan Norton
Date: 2/9/2022 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, BJ. Thank you for sponsoring this contest. I always enjoy your contests. Best wishes, Bryan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2022 2:48:00 PM

wow, this is REALLY good love poetry, Bryan I sure do hope you get a win with it . It would be so well deserved

Bryan Norton
Date: 1/7/2022 7:35:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend. I would LOVE to place, for sure. And I would like to read some LOVEly poems even more. Thanks for reading, and good luck. Bryan