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Forever Mine

I was so blessed to be the mother of three, in less than four years from oldest to last. The love I felt for them was fierce and protective, my only regret that they grew up too fast. When they were little, I thought that forever they would be mine to love and to hold. I viewed them as treasures and wouldn’t have traded for diamonds or rubies or mountains of gold. As they grew older, I knew I must loosen the ties that had bound them to my very soul. They needed to grow and to find their own persons. Each one had the right to set his or her goal. If there were troubles, I do not remember. In memory those years brought me nothing but joy. If I could go back now to when they were children, I’d go in a flash to my two girls and my boy. But I couldn’t be prouder of the children I raised and the parents in kind they have turned out to be. They have given me grandchildren to love and to hold just as I did once with my own precious three. My son died too early and I was heart- broken but the love that we had for each other sustains. The love and the pride that I had while I had him is worth all the sorrow and relieves the pain. Somehow my daughters have turned things around. They act more the parents and I am their child. They worry and fuss and spoil me completely. I know I’m a mother on whom fate has smiled. Won no. 4

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Date: 6/27/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's "My Children" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2011 1:12:00 PM
Joyce, you are a blessed mother. Congrats on your excellent win with this wonderful poem on your kids and the happiness you've shared with them. love, gautami
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:59:00 PM
What a beautiful poem and family you have created, Joyce! I am so touched by this poem, ...the example set by you, I'm sure is what made them all succeed. I am also a very lucky mother of 3...two sons and a daughter...and feel exactly as you ..with pride, and the knowledge that I am blessed. Congratulations on this wonderful poem! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:50:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in children contest with this lovely write my friend... such sensitivity .. enjoy another victory with luv...
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:48:00 PM
Wow for me this would have been higher the last 2 verses are such powerful finishers! Congrad's on EVERYTHING..Mom, Grandmom all
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:49:00 PM
You had me sighing and smiling all the way through reading and then your last two stanzas left me misty-eyed and with a lump in my throat. You truly are a poetess with loads of finesse. :-)
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:52:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Joyce. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:25:00 AM
you are really lucky to have such children *luv skat
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:22:00 AM
A heart-warming poem, even with its bitter-sweet content, Joyce. All parents (and grandparents) will be able to relate to this. My wife and I have two grown sons (we should have had two daughters also, but my wife suffered a miscarriage and a stillbirth). Now we have two lovely granddaughters! Family can be a great treasure to us. Thanks for sharing. Love and kind regards, Robert.
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