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Forever Lost

I have depression I'm an emotional wreck I gotta pull it together Together before I lose Lose everything

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/29/2014 9:52:00 AM

Your poem is brief, but tells a whole story. Congrats for having your work featured! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:05:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2014 10:24:00 AM

this is the way I feel at times... Leilani, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2014 2:05:00 PM

Hi leilani bonge, I wish over coming depression, was as easy as 123... Great write... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT