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Forever Isn'T As Long As It Used To Be

You softly whispered In my ear the words Forever But somewhere your Eyes told me that Is Not True. So why must My heart dissapear As If it never existed. It used to be pure Long Before you came into My perfect world As Polite as you could be To win me over. But It Never seemd true in The small obscure words Used. But I believed your Gullable lies anyway, To Cover what has been in My head shouting to Be Free. Faint words refused to be heard from what Is A weak concious. People Say love is real. Well, is It? *Note: ~*Now just read the words that are spaced out*~

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/24/2014 8:38:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your lines here Cathrine well done..'

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/18/2009 12:42:00 PM

LOVELY FORMAT XD

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 8:02:00 PM

....I really like again Your thoughts and Your message within this wonderful and heartfelt write~and hopefully many will be blessed by it!!?:):)~But it is truly too bad, that for so many, love doesn't last forever~Smile~but not all~for for some, "Their Love Is Eternal!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours,' Forever, John!!!"~"Happy Easter Dear Catherine!!!":):) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 7:56:00 PM

....Whether some need to hear it? Say it? Believe it? Or dream about? Sadly though, it is often abused; whether intentionally or not!? Yet, as Carolyn also said, it can 'never' be said enough between friends and family members!!!:):)~Smile, I hope that life has been treating "You" wonderfully dear lady~and that "Your Good Friday & Easter Sunday Will Be Blessed With Over Flowing Joys & Love!!!":):)....cont....

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 7:51:00 PM

"Hello Beautiful & Precious Catherine Adams!!!":):)...."I Love You Forever"....Smile, nice write here dear lady~with a great thoughtful layout to emphasize Your message to the readers!!!:):)~And I agree with Carolyn about her feelings in regards to the word "Love!?"~Used at the drop of a hat within many relationships....cont....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 6:03:00 PM

Catherine, your message comes through loud and clear, even without your note. People who say they will love you "forever" are not always up to making such a commitment. It probably just feels good to say the word. "Love" is another overused word between men and women -- not talking about the love for friends or family, in those cases the word love can never be overused. Very good observation in this poem, and cleverly laid out!