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Forever In Your Eyes

First time as I met your eyes, found them gateway to your heart Observing them I was mesmerized, it was not easy to look apart Rejoiced my gaze and I have to confess, it was love at first sight Everlasting memories eyes did create, in silent and starry night Voiceless was I, my heart raced while I tried to unlock my gaze Enticed by your eyes, I conceded to be lost in an endless maze Regrets from life melted away, and I forgot my old doleful days In the years gone by, though youth is lost but our love has grown Nestled in love's warmth secrets of my heart your eyes have known Your miraculous eyes are so sincere, they don't know how to lie Ocean of love for you I feel, you shall stay in my heart until I die Unforgettable is our past, beautiful years we have spent together Refreshed are those memories, filled with happiness and laughter Even today when I look at your eyes I sail deep and get immersed Your eyes, so intoxicating, I find them perfect for my poetic verse Everlasting is my love for you, you came as a blessing in disguise Seal your eyes for sleep now, when they open, it will be my sunrise. July 20, 2016. Forever in your eyes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton 'Whisper Sweet Nothings' Contest Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 11/23/2017 2:26:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Meenakshi - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Meenakshi. Well done.
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:16:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/11/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 8/5/2016 10:01:00 AM
Meenaskshi, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/5/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Eve... have sent you a soup mail.
Date: 7/25/2016 5:06:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:50:00 PM
Well done, Meenakshi, much enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/24/2016 5:01:00 PM
Meenakshi, congratulations on your Third Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
Meenakshi ,,congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:19:00 AM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your winning write.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:40:00 PM
Good use of words meenu:) goodluck
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:39:00 PM
absolutely delightful acrostic Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 7/20/2016 11:21:00 PM
Thank You...

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