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Forever In Your Eyes

First night, he caught my hands, Ornate place but sweats for fans, Rather cold outside burning desires, Enduring lust blossom for pleasure, Ventured a kiss on my chin, Elating joy for the gap is thin - a beautiful Romeo Juliet tale within. Inducing love in to my heart, Never I enjoyed this scarlet art, Yard of ale when licked and sipped, Ounces more need to be picked, Umber light a mystic sight Rustic beauties all over so bright, Evening gown, saree and Crown, Yelled for rest till the morning sun, Ears went wet for stories of years, Softly whispered you stay in my eyes forever... 14 July,2016

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Date: 7/16/2016 1:33:00 AM
Lovely, rich imagery, Madhupriya, love the 'scarlet art'. I'm sure you will do well. Viv x
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/20/2016 6:16:00 AM
thank you VIV;)
Date: 7/15/2016 11:03:00 AM
This is a nice poem young lady...should do well in the contest. Good Luck! MC
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/15/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you MC:)
Date: 7/14/2016 8:59:00 PM
some wonderful images of your love in here! Good luck in the contest.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/15/2016 2:06:00 AM
Thanks Andrea;)
Date: 7/14/2016 6:36:00 PM
so nice...
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/15/2016 2:07:00 AM
Thanks Fred;)

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