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Forever In Your Eyes

Forever in Your Eyes From the beginning, it was in your eyes Opening your heart, mind and soul to me. Rescuing me from myself and the loneliness inside. Each step we took brought new emotions and promises. Variations on a theme played in the background Enticing and exciting every breath we took Reaching deep into our one blended soul. Iconical, indescribable love ingrained within a dream Nervously given, magnificently accepted and shared. Youthful yearnings so sincere bound in body and soul Openly we gave and once given never taken back United as one our love was unquenchable Relentless almost radioactive. Each encounter was effortlessly evolving Your eyes touching mine Easing to promises of forever love Soon lost in broken promises of a forever never to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/20/2017 7:49:00 AM
Hello DM Babbit , your poem is sad. A romance not meant to be. Is so sad. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:57:00 PM
A great little write, with a crushing ending, very poignant. Congrats on your placing in the contest el Babbito, Viv
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:19:00 PM
Email Babbit, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:31:00 AM
Hi DM, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/13/2016 11:18:00 AM
beautiful but with a sad ending DM good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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