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Forever In Your Eyes

Farewell, for now, my dearest sweet, Overwhelming sadness and joy the heart speaks, Remembering times of beauty until we’ll meet, Embracing moments captured memories seized, Vows forever and always complete, Endless and everlasting emotions run deep, Romances and kisses weep, Intimately and affectionately held No more tears until time comes to greet, Yesterday and forever in your eyes, Overcoming all unknown fears Undertaking life’s final journey Regaining hope when all thoughts were lost, Eternity following on in tomorrow’s paradise, Years speak out words that express love, Engaging every minute of intimacy, Savouring together every second of time that passes. 13/07/2016 For competition Sponsor John Hamilton

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Date: 7/24/2016 10:54:00 PM
Probably the most sorrowful of all the entries, but lovely all the same. COngrats, Wendy, much enjoyed. Viv x
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/25/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you VIV xx
Date: 7/24/2016 5:02:00 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your fine win for your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/25/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Sandra x
Date: 7/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/25/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Skat x
Date: 7/24/2016 11:27:00 AM
Hi Wendy, Congrats on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/24/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Alex xxx
Date: 7/18/2016 6:06:00 AM
Well writ, Wendy, full of sadness, the acceptance and finally, hope, that we all have when losing someone. I'm sure you will do well. Viv x
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/18/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Viv xxx
Date: 7/17/2016 8:00:00 AM
- A beautiful and romantic poems, Wendy - Good luck in the contest - I see you've posted on "my wall", but I have not F- book so I can not answer you - But, very nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/17/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine that's very kind of you xxxx
Date: 7/16/2016 10:56:00 AM
It is so flowing. you used the letters of this form VERY well, WEndy. Great poem.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/16/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Date: 7/15/2016 9:12:00 AM
I especially like your first lines. daver
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/15/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Daver your very kind thank you xxxx
Date: 7/14/2016 5:50:00 PM
Well done Wendy. Filled with emotion. God Bless, JB
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/14/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Judy x
Date: 7/13/2016 10:48:00 AM
beautifully penned Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/13/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Jan it was a hard one for me first time acrostic x

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