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Forever In Your Eyes

F rolicking freely, I float in the O ceans of your eyes R eaching for the depths of love, I E merge stronger and surer each time V ows we took years ago still tingle and Elate me to this day. My soul still R oars with happiness beyond belief I n my dreams I see you every N ight though you sleep with your hand on me Y ou have united my mind and heart in O ne note and string. In U nison they sing and dance R epeating just your name without reprieve E nough of the folly, I chide myself Y es, expanse of your chest is mine alright.But a look at those E yes and I start to lose S ense and footing yet again Written on :07/11/2016

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Date: 7/27/2016 3:39:00 AM
What a beautiful piece!! Congrats Sara, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:01:00 AM
Beautiful Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Wendy!
Date: 7/24/2016 10:40:00 PM
Lovely, Sara, well done, Viv x
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Viv!
Date: 7/24/2016 5:00:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your Third Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks dear Sandra!
Date: 7/24/2016 4:22:00 PM
Hi, Sara, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thinks a lot Skat!
Date: 7/24/2016 11:09:00 AM
Hi Sara, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Alexis!

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