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Forever In Pain

Sweet little Arial came home to find her mother lying on the floor she gave her a shake pushed on her chest but nothing woke her up. So she laid in her arms started to cry as Arial spoke these words. "Hold me mama don't leave me I'll stay right here by your side as long as I am here your soul can not depart stay away from the light" But as the hours went her mothers skin went cold her arm pulled away. Arial stayed laid with her mother until she was taken away and laid down to rest never will she feel her mothers touch again forever she will feel the pain

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Date: 4/21/2024 11:12:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/30/2016 6:10:00 PM
Hi Michelle, and a big welcome. I love your poem though it is sad. I read it twice. nicely written I look forward to more of your work. Thank you for sharing and have fun with ps. hugs xx.
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Date: 10/27/2016 11:04:00 AM
Michelle, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/27/2016 6:31:00 AM
Very good poem ... touching ...
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