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Forever In Eden

Sun shining, angels draw attention from the softest touch Seeing the glow from your aura, love at this time, I didn’t have much You looked at me with an inner love, you touched my lonely soul It’s no wonder with you I could not wait any longer to enrol You held my hand, shared your deepest thoughts with me You unwrapped your heart, a gift opened for all to see How did you break down the barricade around my core? I’ll never know, but for that reason, its you I adore. Feeling the warmth of your radiant skin, can you be from up above? Overwhelming, as the angel I embrace is protection sent to love I close my teary eyes, disbelief that your head was encompassed by light. Visions of a Halo so full and calm, so tranquil but so bright. Wanting you is the easiest task I have ever employed Having been blessed with you, I remain forever overjoyed Feelings that damage you absorb, replaced with loving devotion How my life runs more structured, even with all the emotion I treasure the time we spend together, moments forever stored Golden meadows, such a glorious place. My thoughts are never ignored. Loving you is a wonderful vision, made real by you in my life That’s the reason why you allowed me, to call you my Wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2010 3:08:00 PM
Romance blooms in abundance in this quite exceptional poem > now this is love >> James
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Date: 3/24/2010 12:23:00 PM
Gareth... did u receive my Soup Mail yesterday? luv.. "Sweetheart" .. and thankxxx so very much for your special comments on my poetry and blog .. very appreciative of your dynamic input...luv..
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:50:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic Gareth and so appealing to the reader.. I thoroughly enjoyed this lovely poetry tonight.. SOUP MAIL shortly on your blog subject..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:06:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to marriage, and the heartfelt love you feel! Wonderful, and romantic...love this! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Gareth. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2010 5:58:00 AM
A very beautiful poem, full of beauty..I have enjoyed the read...
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