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Forever Immortal Love

Deathless and breathless you’re simply divine, timeless and endless, you’ve broken my chain- imperishable, hard to sustain, I’ll sketch your silhouette with some red wine- With passion we shall always intertwine… On my heart you’ve left an undying stain marked with immortality not in vain- Oh beloved, you send chills up my spine. Perpetual love when we made our vow to live forever til’ our dying day- Everlasting compassion with much trust, infinite adoring life will allow us to fulfill our promises today... ...to love even after we turn to dust. February 19, 2017

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Date: 10/30/2018 8:22:00 AM
Poweful and so well written. Congrats on your top finish. P.S. Check out my blog about SoupMail fix
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Date: 10/29/2018 6:36:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Lu Loo.
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:49:00 AM
You've created a beautiful sonnet! Congrats, Luloo! I'm saving this beauty! 7
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:24:00 PM
Laura congratulations for an excellent entry...
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:53:00 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Laura, Roy. :))
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Date: 2/19/2017 5:19:00 PM
Love the concept of your poem as love is eternal and glad you chose Italian Sonnet, as did I...good luck dear poet
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