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I could not wait intil I bedcame 10 years old in my hometown First Christian Church of 
Fort Scott, Kansas, that is when Reverand Paul Ely dunked me and I came up smiling and singing and Saved. 

FOREVER FREE I stand before you, judged, a sinner be, relinquishing all rights, I might have had, but pray thee quick, to judge the soul of me, then lay to rest--the sins that drive me mad. I seek forgiveness, that's all of my plea, for all I've been in life, as having fun, and all the hurt--that's been--because of me I pray put in the past, as if there's none. I ask your guidance, on my bended knee protect my days ahead, if there are some and never let mine eyes again to see the lust of life from where all sin has come. And Jesus, give me wisdom, now to be your servant who's been saved--forever free! © ron wilson aka vee bdosa the doylestown poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/23/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanx LyricMan, comments like yours and Sunlite Wanter keep us focusing on fiishing another poem or song. Are you a songwriter, too?
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Date: 6/22/2018 10:27:00 PM
Vee, I really enjoyed reading your work tonight. I really appreciate how you ended the poem focused on Jesus!
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:48:00 AM
I answered my own question by reading just 3 of your poems, I can tell you are s songwriter as well. I will read more.
Date: 6/22/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite, Amen (So Be It.)
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Date: 6/22/2018 10:17:00 AM
I would like to pray this beautiful and honest prayer with you!
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