Forever Flow

Blue waterfalls sing A Heavenly song; the gift: Everlasting life Inspired by Raul's Rhythm of the Falls Contest

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/10/2012 1:26:00 PM

Simply beautiful - such a refreshing verse. Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/13/2010 10:58:00 AM

This is soothing. water is a beautiful part of nature. i can feel its heavenly song here. And when i wrote "i d i o t" i wasn't feeling very well.at all. so i had to let it out of my system. i appreciate your honesty. thanks.And you may call me Lynn, can i call you Daniel? if thats alright. and im just wondering, that is interesting, i suppose you can feel that we met at that time in that place. i can sense it too, but the time I feel is different. -Always Lynn

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/30/2009 1:36:00 PM

You do live in my heart silly - forever. Thanks for your kind congrats on my 'Heart". Love you dear, sweet, wonderful brother. xoxoxo

Joshua Lacey

Date: 11/4/2009 2:17:00 PM

sure can be spiritual, great poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/1/2009 8:51:00 PM

Luv this one HG.. I signed onto P.S. after this contest so I missed it but this was a stunning entry... and I agree with u on the comments about my Bronx Bombers... egos and money go hand in hand.. but I am a sports nut so I loved being entertained by the professional antics of all sports... keeps me on the right track... Soup Mail... Linda-Marie

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest!

John Freeman

Date: 10/25/2009 7:19:00 PM

I love this Haiku, HG, about the most important thing one could ever write about, Thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Moses

Cecil Hickman

Date: 10/24/2009 11:33:00 PM

very beautifully written with great description and style, congratulations on winning to which I agree this truly deserves it,,and Thank you for your more then kind words and especially for taking the time to read and comment,,Blessings..Cecil

Date: 10/24/2009 4:11:00 PM

What an uplifting and inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations, HGarvey Daniel Esquire, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2009 3:34:00 PM

I'm so pleased you were among the winners, HG! This does more than merely paint a picture, it offers a message too. Some haikus are simply descriptions; yours is simply inspirational! Love, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations on win...I enjoyed your Haiku and am glad I didn't have to judge this contest...they were all so good. Marty