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The first time, I saw my love it was a moment in time, It was a spiritual experience and I was swept away; I abandoned myself to this perfect head-spinning love, Obsessive musings, like an addict with mood swings. It was more than his physical attractiveness for me, I was lost in a dream of a forever, ever beautiful love; Falling for him was like falling into a crystal clear stream, I dreamed again and again of our precious moments. I was an emotional wreck, who could not sleep or even eat, My heart beat faster when he was even just talking; When we were apart, I was full of longing and anxiety, Falling in love is very bizarre, it creeps up magically. Soon our lifes were entwined and we were deeply bonded, Coated with desire, respect and a genuine courtship; I let go of expectations and overlooked all his negative, He was my lover, my friend and my companion always. We never crowded each other, we both had an outside life, With our own interests and friends, our eyes never roamed; Sadly, we buried a child on our journey and that made us stronger, He took this weeping girl that was me and I was healed. Then, the unimaginable happened, my love was taken away, Another path was written for him and I was left far behind; I only find my love down a winding path in a place of tears, His name engraved in cold stone for all of eternity. But, my love for him endures and will never, ever dissipate, Our bond is endless, and I know he waits beyond the clouds; It is a love that even death cannot destroy, and it will go on and on, And in my dreams, he lives still, quiet, gentle and strong. ___________________________ September 28, 2015 Narrative Submitted to the contest, 101 In A Row - 6 Sponsor, PD Third Place ________________________________________ Written for the contest, Falling in Love, sponsor, Aiyah de Torres First Place

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Date: 7/23/2016 5:58:00 PM
Hi Constance, another excellent write does leave your pen and paint the page with words that paint the canvas of the mind. This is a beautiful poem filled with your usual emotional content. Your words always hold something to touch everyone. It is both an honour and pleasure to read them. This write, as all your writes touches deeply the heart of the reader. Hugs....Mike. XX This is a seven and a fave Constance.
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:43:00 PM
wow, Constance. I saw what you said at the blog so I just had to read your poem. Can't believe I had not been to this one yet.Marvelous heartfelt work. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win on this beautiful poem, bl
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Date: 7/23/2016 4:33:00 PM
Beautifully written, Broken Wings. Love like this never is lost. Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:27:00 PM
Lovely win, Broken, Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:25:00 PM
Nice win. SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:44:00 PM
Excellent win Constance!!!!!!
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Date: 10/21/2015 7:31:00 AM
BW,you described perfectly what it's like to fall in love. Your epic love story was sad but beautiful as well. Great job! Congratulations on your top win it was deserved:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 10/20/2015 9:27:00 PM
A tribute to the one you love...heartfelt, congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/20/2015 7:45:00 PM
Oh Broken, your love poem is so full of the joy of perfect love along with the deep sorrow of the losses you endured. But your endless bond and the faith that your love "waits beyond the clouds;..." is the wondrous gift that sustains you. I was very touched by your beautiful poem. My heartfelt congratulations to you for your top win. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/20/2015 6:39:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, congratulations to the best ever love poem that truly catches my heart and soul!!! :O)) Thank you for joining in my contest ... Enjoy the treat of my love !!! ^_^
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Date: 9/30/2015 12:02:00 PM
bw, you know I feel your pain....but I am sure you know that that Love still remains....and I am sure he wants you to find another....I am sure of this because your happiness is the only concern of a true lover....;)
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:42:00 PM
Perfectly depicting true love and greatest loss! Romance and life do not always live together until both pass on in old age. Yet the future promise holds the tie that gives Hope eternity rectifies earthly tragedies! Awesome poem. A7
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:31:00 PM
A fascinating piece. Brilliant..........A.M.
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:15:00 AM
Very moving and heartfelt Broken Wings. Lots of luck with the contest.
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Date: 9/28/2015 7:46:00 PM
I'm intrigued with your write BW. I love how you constructed it. Phenomenal in it beauty.......A.M.
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:55:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings this is so so heartbreaking a love story - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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