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Forever As I Fall

Forever as I fall Upon this land of evergreen, lone of seeded desperate aching formed in shadows of lattice’d phrase Poetic pleasures a’ cast the trees Echoing…calling…beckoning, as your voice it sings to me in mesmeric lyrics Tissue paper lanterns sway in stardust breezes, softly illuminating a canopy of desires Angelic sighs float on wings of enchanted dragonflies soaring to my heart in whispered stanzas As melodies of effervescent glow, accompanied by strings of spider’s web and dew drop wishes harmonize I shall remain within this endless dream forever as I fall in love ~ with you Good night Soupers

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Date: 1/10/2017 8:11:00 AM
Tissue paper lanterns sway in stardust breezes..Sigh..Oh those dragon flies...I love the imagery...I love your words...And Im gonna favour it..CC
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 1/10/2017 12:11:00 AM
To be in love is a dream all of its self...lovely Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tim. It sure is. :)
Date: 1/9/2017 9:08:00 PM
Beautiful love poem Chris; good night to you too~Che :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Cheryl.
Date: 1/9/2017 8:35:00 PM
You surely have the gift of poetry in you! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for saying so Arthur.
Date: 1/9/2017 6:43:00 PM
Have a good night Chris. This was beautiful and sweet :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Akkina
Date: 1/9/2017 6:07:00 PM
Oh, to be able to fall in love again! LOL. So beautiful as it carries you away.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sunlite. I am happy you liked this one.

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