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FOREVER ADELINE - Narrated by Poetry Soup Poet - SAM SCOTT

FOREVER ADELINE
Acknowledgement: A big thank you Sam Scott from our Poetry Soup Community, for your splendid narrative contribution. Synopsis: A story of unrequited love that began in childhood. Despite the passage of time, his love remained hauntingly painful even after she fell in love with another.
Aloft on wings of rhapsody, together spirits soar Wild, untamed and sensuous, just like a lion's roar. HOW LONG AGO IT SEEMS THE TWO OF YOU FIRST MET AS TIME IS RENDERED MEANINGLESS OR TIMELESS, BETTER YET Though in that Timeless moment, along came winds of change Love swiftly rearranged, but what it WAS, remained Oh, Adeline, so fair and bright, Eyes, like stars, shine with delight, Oh fickle heart, now you await your new love's sweet embrace Blinded by the callous cad, you foolishly don't resist In the quench of love's allure, Time does not exist His loving lips will not reveal your new love's promiscuous charms Intoxicated, unrepentantly, he sways to others' wanton arms. Across the bronze Sienna shores and blissful sea breeze skies, He ever trails your hungry heart through his own saddened eyes. Oh, Adeline in Twilight's Hush, where shadows dance and play, A tale of love and longing When Night succumbs to Day Oh, Adeline, will it be mere friendship, he would fain? To be just a deliverer of love notes, a job he will disdain Oh, Adeline ~ Sweet Adeline At every glance - a secret shared, his every word - love unsaid, In every touch - a fire dared HOW LONG AGO IT SEEMS ~ THE TWO OF YOU FIRST MET AS TIME IS RENDERED MEANINGLESS OR TIMELESS, BETTER YET Chansons ne sont que chansons Quand on écrit de l'amour Comment d'écrire des chansons De la femme qui est l'amour? English translation from above: Songs are just songs When we write about love How do you write songs Of the woman who is Love? OH, ADELINE ~ SWEET ADELINE
by Maria Williams © Background garden images taken on our recent visit to the amazing Hunter Valley Gardens, Sydney, Australia Musicians Harp - Rolando Cristaldo Violins: Fátima Benítez Celeste Osorio

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/29/2024 5:34:00 AM
The seamless integration of many parts in this production was enhanced by a visually appealing video. The combined effort demonstrated is very astounding, particularly Maria's lyrical writing and Sam's excellent reading. The following musical arrangement struck a particular chord with me, expressing the deep emotions linked with the young man's grief over unrequited love. As a viewer, I was delighted with the poetic spirit, Sam's remarkable contribution, and the overall execution of the piece.  A Fave for me. I am grateful to you, for kindly sharing your enormous gift with us.
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Date: 3/3/2024 12:00:00 PM
This is an amazing collaboration! Beautiful writing Maria and Sam read it so well. It all came together perfectly with the scenic video too! Congratulations to you all :)
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Sam Scott
Date: 3/4/2024 6:35:00 AM
You are both just too kind :)). Thank you.
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/4/2024 4:16:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by Heidi, Always a pleasure seeing you . So glad you liked it. Sam did an amazing job narrating....Hugs
Date: 2/22/2024 7:51:00 AM
Dear Maria and Sam, I just wanted to take a moment to express how deeply moved I was by your collaborative poem. Maria, your words soar with elegance and grace, portraying a picture of love's complexities and the timeless dance of emotions. Your mastery of language and imagery truly captivated my heart. Sam, your narration brought Maria's words to life in a mesmerizing and enchanting way. Your voice conveyed the passion and longing within the poem with such depth and emotion, making the experience of listening to it truly unforgettable. Together, you have created a masterpiece that touches the soul and speaks to the universal experiences of love, longing, and the passage of time. Your collaboration is a testament to artistic expression's beauty and storytelling's power to touch hearts and inspire minds. Your poem has left an indelible mark on my heart, and I am grateful to have experienced it. - Blessings, Daniel
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/24/2024 6:47:00 PM
Your collaboration is a testament to artistic expression's beauty and storytelling's power to touch hearts and inspire minds. I had to read this a few times, dear Daniel, what a wonderful way of expressing what you think. I'm very flattered, as I'm sure Sam is too. Thanks so much ...Hugs
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/22/2024 11:00:00 PM
Dear Daniel, I can only thank you. As I was indeed grateful to be part of such a timeless project. Blessings.
Date: 2/19/2024 10:37:00 PM
A beautiful experience, Maria. The background music resonated with me as this young man experienced to agony of unrequited love. Your poetry, Sam's contribution and the whole production was a joy to experience. A FAV for my list, my friend. Thanks for sharing your immense talent with us. May you receive blessings as you so freely give them to others. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:13:00 AM
Thanks dear Bill for you encouraging words, Maria did a fabulous poem so my job was made very easy :))
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:25:00 PM
Dear Bill, unrequited love is the worst kind; I hope the persistence paid off for the young man concerned as I'm sure yours did too. You and Sara are truly a beautiful couple. I'm so glad you liked the poem/video; I'll be sure to pass on your praise, dear Bill. Thanks so much for the fave, I appreciate it my friend. My blessings to you and Sara as well...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 12:05:00 PM
Dear Maria.. Your poem is a poignant exploration of love's complexities, from its euphoric beginnings to its inevitable trials and tribulations. Through its evocative language and rich imagery, the poem captures the essence of human experience, inviting readers to reflect on the enduring power of love and the mysteries of the heart... Sam read it really well and Ron had produced a very good video to accompany it.. Well done..
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:14:00 AM
Thank you S1 :) I enjoyed myself way too much!
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:18:00 PM
S1 what a pleasure it is seeing you over the years, seven to be precise. The astute comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you for the support and friendship; I appreciate it more than you know. Yes, I agree. Sam and Ron did an amazing job. I will be sure to pass it on...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 11:16:00 AM
Outstanding! Both poet and narrator. Mesmerising, captivating, and engaging. A must save. Well done!!!
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:15:00 AM
So lovely to hear from you. Maria writes lovely words for any narration. A sheer pleasure for me. Blessings :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Budge; I truly appreciate your support, my friend. So glad you liked it so much, and for the Fave...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 9:18:00 AM
C'est magnifique! A love story that must end in pain. Loss of youthful love changed to a wealthy and gorgeous solder. Your video deserves all praise, to Ron, Sam and yourself. The accompanying music is competent and perfect—Hugs and a fav.
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:16:00 AM
Victor, I thank you for your kindness :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:10:00 PM
Victor, my dear friend, I so agree with you; unrequited love is the worst kind. I do hope his persistence paid off. I truly appreciate your well wishes to all three of us; I'll be sure to pass it on. Thanks so much for the Fave, I appreciate it...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 8:30:00 AM
An excellent overall video. Congratulations to all involved....Maria, Sam and Ron. The poem itself is a captivating narrative in rhyme. (deserving of a fav) Warm regards // paul
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:17:00 AM
Paul, thank you :))
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for the Fave Paul. xx
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:02:00 PM
Thanks so much my lovely friend, so glad you liked it. I'll be passing on the congratulations to Sam and Ron. They made it a Masterpiece...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 8:12:00 AM
What an immense delight a story of the heart! You embellish it to the highest levels of beauty and glory ! The secrets of Love never unveiled and you added to its mystery ! Untouchable.. unattainable.. Ever under its spell and unable to contain it in time and space! Dearest Maria, what a tremendous pleasure reading your amazing poetry and watching your well composed visual ! Always in awe of your stunning work of poetry and art that deserves to be highly valued and honoured. Love and hugs.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 11:00:00 PM
Oh, Dearest Besma, it's always such a pleasure to see you here on my page; your constant support and friendship mean a lot to me. I can't believe we've known each other for more than 6 years now. How time flies. Thanks once again my sweet friend. The video and narration made the movie what it is . Love and hugs xox
Date: 2/19/2024 6:31:00 AM
Gorgeously rendered. I am mesmerized by the poem and video. Congratulations to both of you.
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 2:19:00 AM
Richard thanks, the pleasure was all mine, Maria is a delight :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 10:56:00 PM
Thank so much for dropping by dear Richard. So glad you liked it so much. As I mentioned before, Sam is an amazing narrator....Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 6:05:00 AM
Hmmm... I left a comment, it disappeared lol. I watched this first on YouTube. Sam is a great find, such an awesome seasoned narrator, I've listened to him before. Your multi media offerings are always world class with a great story as the foundation. Kudos to all involved!
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 10:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Tommy; I appreciate you, my friend. That is an awesome compliment. So glad you liked it so much Sam is an amazing narrator. No prompts from me; he knew exactly how to read the poem.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/19/2024 1:35:00 PM
Yes, Maria is very generous and big-hearted.
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/19/2024 9:21:00 AM
I have to say thank you Tom, I am humbled by your comments, but the narration was probably the easiest bit and Maria was so very gracious in her kindness to allow me to have a go. I appreciate your thoughfulness, blessings, Tom :)
Date: 2/19/2024 5:16:00 AM
This is so heartfelt and artistic story of love, Maria. Much enjoyed the musical journey through your words and audio. Life doesn't always have happy endings--though love remains! A FAVE for your creative depiction, my friend.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 10:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Vijay; I appreciate you, my friend. So glad you liked it so much and thanks for the fave...Hugs
Date: 2/19/2024 5:01:00 AM
So masterfully done Maria, and the voice only adds to this heavenly composition by you and Sam. Congrats on a job well, done, Amazing what one can do with teamwork, you are blessed !
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/20/2024 3:01:00 AM
Lovely to have you visit, Vie x I was indeed truly blessed. Sx
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/19/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. Love and appreciate you xxx

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