Forever

In the dark I come alive Tonight You guide my way Into the light A touch A sigh Close as we are Our lips Collide Slowly you caress Skin on fire Burning inside Filled with desire Secrets inside me Released by your touch Together we are Forever

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 8:37:00 PM

Elizabeth, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:46:00 AM

Elizabeth, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Elizabeth King
Date: 4/1/2015 10:40:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2015 9:02:00 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Elizabeth :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth King
Date: 4/1/2015 10:41:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness

Deborah Turner

Date: 3/28/2015 8:34:00 PM

Good poem.

Elizabeth King
Date: 3/29/2015 11:11:00 AM

Many thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2015 3:16:00 PM

Beautiful passionate romantic write:-) I especially adore the final stanza :-) hugs jan xx 7 xx

Elizabeth King
Date: 3/29/2015 11:11:00 AM

Thank you :)