Forever

Forever Fighting again – what a shock Our love seems to somehow be blocked Really, let’s fix this mess End bad feelings, distress Value anew Every trial we’ve been through Remember how much I love you

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 10:09:00 AM

NiCely done poem, Heather, congrats on the win

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/9/2014 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Heather.

Heather Buxton

Date: 10/9/2014 2:08:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words on your kind words :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 4:08:00 PM

Fixing the relationship is part of keeping it alive. Well said. Congrats for your win.

Heather Buxton
Date: 10/9/2014 2:35:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Andrea :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 11:11:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Heather :-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 2:16:00 PM

forever love - lovely sentiment despite all the ups and downs its worth fighting for - keep on talking and loving:-) Hugs jan xx

Heather Buxton
Date: 10/9/2014 2:36:00 AM

And you too Jan, thanks for the interest and the kind words :) xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/7/2014 4:54:00 AM

Nice acrostic! Relationships always need lots of care and maintenance just like anything else in life and more in order to preserve it or keep it alive. Communication is so important at all times. Best to you heather! xxxx D.

Heather Buxton
Date: 10/9/2014 2:38:00 AM

That is so sweet of you to say, thank you :) xx