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Forever, It seems to me, Since you lay right here. Forever, I thought we’d be, Till you disappeared. A lighthouse sunk to the sea, In the dark of the night. With no light to guide me to you, Ill drift here, Till I can set sail again, or forever fall at the edge of your reef.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/4/2014 4:28:00 PM
This is just a nice composition Birgitta short but very striking!
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:43:00 PM
Hi Birgitta, this is a wonderful write. Well done!
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Date: 6/18/2014 4:01:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. Looking forward to reading lots and lots of your work
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Date: 6/18/2014 12:36:00 AM
Hi Birgitta Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and all the secrets of your heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing because that is what PS members are to me.... As for your first poem i love it, i cant wait to read more of your wonderful work..Your new PS friend RRC
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:40:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Birgitta. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:57:00 PM
Hi Birgitta, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2014 12:59:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Birgitta :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/15/2014 11:23:00 AM
Brigitta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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