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Forever

In the afterglow Of the fire’s burn Our breath now slow Nothing more to learn For tonight we were Open books to each other Clothes flying in a blur Skin and spots to discover A trembling quake Rose up from my waist As I flooded like a lake After your first taste Lips like velvet Sucked into mine Never to forget As we intertwined A joyous squeal Let out so loudly As I finally got to feel You being enveloped by me Over and over again We sang out our praise And shook when It was our final phase Collapsing on your wet skin We lay there gasping You still within Hands still grasping Rolling off to your side You held me close to you At the same time we sighed And forever our hearts were through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/25/2013 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Poet Destroyer! And ya that's what I was going for Drake! But your poem inspired it all! Ammazing poem dude!
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:11:00 PM
My oh my...I am genuinely grinning & stunned at the same time. That last line is the essential line of the entire writing. Want/Need, all intertwined into a connection that goes beyond skin's depth. This...this was awesome! =D
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:59:00 PM
wow... Now that is hot passion... Love the -Lips like velvet sucked into mine. - The end sounds like an end... Elissa, the flow and imagery are tasty... enjoyed...LINDA
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